Lyric

Lyric

Lyrically he'll mesmerize
towering tunes
bewitching serenader harmonize
amass women

recapture a lay
generated artificial moves
physiques weird apoplexy
refrain mewl
strain a bleed

fidget fingering a bud
shrinking into a nub
cream shed bedspread
she is the perfect secret

ten minute ride
two hour rendezvous
intermittent parallel evaporated rain drops

she'll disappear
onto Austin street Bon Fire
fall forfeited gave way
to winters salt sidewalks
pitted potholes, brick leviathan

no one to view
relaxed tempo
a hurried lover
suddenly oblivious

her soul obscure heavens hug the Eiderdown politely
bridle the blur
demons, angels battle
for the prodigal one
exhausted full of his domestic grains

ax angels
fence with fine devils
ones pettiness
uncomplicated spacial

the black serenade
accused of love
inveigle to confess anon

© 2011 Lepadah



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From: OjiN (OjiN)
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Posted: Jan 26 11 02:01 PM
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Wow. OjiN no have words for this. This poem one of best this year. OjiN wish he write like this.



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this has some extra dimensions to it that i simply don't have access to yet. i like the line "the black serenade"...


From: SparkyDashforth (SparkyDashforth)
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Wonderful poeming!

Your use of words is highly skilful here.

great images

Sparky