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The Scorch Of The Hot Crotch
From: lepadahxxx (lepadahxxx)
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Posted: Jul 07 11 04:21 PM
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Once sneaking a lunchtime fondle
burning parts
return visit to camouflaged amusement
isolated in the deemed pantheon
of a narcissist
a ladies lavatory
fastening the stall
reeling against the back
agitated unbuckling of slacks
the girly glee massaging quickly the clitoris
that throbbed to a swell
mutiny of three itchy fingers
glob with embrocation
hard thumping a buttock balking
catching a naughty moan
one hand employed tween the wet warmly soaked crotch
another sinking into her Brooks Brothers shirt
nestling a steady breast
pinch to harden the halo
hurrying to alight
realizing she was still at work . . .
© 2011 Lepadah
From: GuyBlakeKett (GuyBlakeKett)
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Posted: Jul 09 11 06:08 AM
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wow. first of all, who could pass up a title like that. and the poem more than lives up to it. terrific stuff.
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From: cumin (cumin)
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Posted: Jul 09 11 06:41 AM
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Just one thing puzzles me about this poem lepadah....what exactly is a ......
"Brooks Brothers shirt"
and where can I buy one?
;)
From: GuyBlakeKett (GuyBlakeKett)
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Posted: Jul 09 11 07:35 AM
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"brooks brothers" is a high-end conservative purveyor of men's very tailored clothing -- sort of USA's Savile Row... (my grandmother bought my brother and me our first - and as it turns out only - Brooks Brothers suits when we were 13: sort of an Episcopalian bar mitzvah. :-)
From: cumin (cumin)
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Posted: Jul 10 11 02:27 AM
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Aaah thank you Guy.....this makes the poem even more intriguing. ;)
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