Thursday, March 29, 2012

Poetry by Lepadah

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Man I'm Talking to You

Player playing
isolate mind eye
fluid body politics
conflict columns compass

upon altar
strange crooked beings
acquire quakes akin to mine
one needed a beloved
less wane jewels to freaks

man . . .
you were once the perfect whim
tender enormous rhythms, polemics & birdie Haiku
happy with the Motown sound
set in old wax; newly found

soft-pedaling down memory lane
"Ooh-oo child" up the 5 Stairsteps
ascend empyrean
Ooo-oo . . . soulful real

frequent obscurity
awaiting lavender morning's
I resent a box kisser
did you not understand
man . . . a request for an unwrinkled smooch

�� 2012 Lepadah

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something had me reading this poem over and over again.......up to now i can't seem to place my finger on it..........it is just appealing to me. if have to quote it will be the whole piece.....so i will just say i loved it....

always
willy

Hello Willy,

Truly humble by your comment/read.

Thanks peace Lepadah

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you went old school on us. i am starting to become a fan.
"Ooo-oo child, things are going to get easier"
great use of the classic music.

Eddie
...

THE PAST IS JUST A LESSON, THE FUTURE IS NOT YET WRITTEN. I LIVE IN THE NOW!

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Hello Eddie,

lol . . . likewise sir. Happy you enjoyed this one.

Peace 1 Lepadah

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