Dream by Sinsemilla (seduction)

Dream by Sinsemilla


beyond a great hill
down into a mossy quagmire
you descend before the glow of moon
before twilight
the still deafening fireball
ablaze
a gaze
even though I need sleep
I watch
under a blanket
an amorphous
revolutionize
the phoenix parousia
i come
crawling out onto you
shelter shoulders
affix to sides
to accommodate
prepare to be envelop
your wings spread thin
I bow blushing
a roaring furnace inside
together eternal we rise
we fly
burst into a trillion colors in the sky
our exorcism in sun eye
away from the mossy beginnings
embedded in my skin
gold flicks
told to shine
you shall return
to sunburn my being again


© 2010 Lepadah




To: lepadahxxx
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Posted: Jun 07 10 09:27 AM
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...wow

you have been

ripping it lately.

Great job!

peace

Obatala




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Posted: Jun 07 10 09:32 AM
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...i am nominating this poem for the IBC.

great, great job Lydia

Peace Obatala


message from neopoets

I must admit I had to look up a few
words within your poem (which is good
for me) In this line:

our exorcism in sun eye

I think it would read better as sun’s eye.

My favorite lines are:

prepare to be envelop
your wings spread thin
I bow blushing
a roaring furnace inside
together eternal we rise
we fly
burst into a trillion colors in the sky

Always, Cat